General Annotation Collection/20151014/17
(cite/perseus/pdlann.254.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Great Job, no corrections necessary. Well done.
November 02, 2015 03:22
General Annotation Collection/20151014/9
(cite/perseus/pdlann.246.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - You have done a very thorough job, here are a couple of corrections which are necessary, well done:
“person” and “relation” tags should all be only lower case and “PSN” should all only be upper case.
"numerous river gods" does not need to be tagged.
November 02, 2015 03:26
General Annotation Collection/20151029/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.280.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - You have done a good job, here are a few things which need correction. Well done:
Your second Hera entry is marked as “person” when it should be marked as “relation”
For Pyracmon there is no stable idea for this figure, do not annotate him.
In your ninth Pyracmon entry mark his stable id in lower case “hephaestus-bio-1”
Your Charis entry is marked as “person” when it should be marked as “relation”
Your second Aphrodite entry is marked as “person” when it should be marked as “relation”
November 02, 2015 03:28
General Annotation Collection/20151017/7
(cite/perseus/pdlann.270.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Good start, you are a missing a few things, otherwise it is well done:
For your first Penelope entry, add “person” and “PSN” tags
For your Aether entry, add “person” and “PSN” tags
For your Thymbris entry add a stable ID
You need to add in relation tag classifications for all your entries
November 02, 2015 03:32
General Annotation Collection/2015114/3
(cite/perseus/pdlann.284.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - This is a good job, there are almost no mistakes, but there is a bit still left to be done. As a whole, good job. Here is what needs to be done:
For your Erysichthon entry redo your "person" tag, as it stands now, it reads "perosn".
Make sure that you tag ALL instances of each name in the entry.
November 06, 2015 23:51
General Annotation Collection/2015116/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.285.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - There are a number of issues with this annotation:
You have annotated the wrong page, the correct page is found on github or via this link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e3h6es6zh1c
You have double tagged entries with both person and relation when they should be separate annotations
You have not provided the stable ID's for the person relations
You need to tag all instances of every name
November 07, 2015 00:08
General Annotation Collection/20151014/9
(cite/perseus/pdlann.246.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Your annotation for the “numerous river gods” is still appearing in your XML, it is not appearing in Hypothesis, which is good. I'm not marking off because it is not technically an error, but please remove it from the spreadsheet (it is the 7th entry).
For the 18th link in your spreadsheet, the Theogony attestation, delete and recreate this annotation, while the links in this annotation are correct, the way they were put into Hypothesis makes them unreadable in the XML.
Finally, please mark this final attestation in the list (Verg. G. 1.31); here is the link to the Perseus text:
http://www.perseus.tufts.edu/hopper/text;jsessionid=3EFC0F2B65927309270870929C2118D7?doc=Perseus%3Atext%3A1999.02.0059%3Abook%3D1%3Acard%3D1
Overall, good work.
November 29, 2015 20:22
General Annotation Collection/20151029/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.280.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - There are still a few problems in this annotation set, please correct them if you would like this published.
Delete your Pyracmon entry. No stable id exists for this figure because he is not in the William Smith Dictionary.
For the 30th entry in your spreadsheet, the Hephaestus annotation which follows Pyrcmon, correct the stable ID to “Hephaestus-bio-1”.
For your Charis annotation, mark “wife” as “relation” not “person”.
For your Aphrodite annotation, mark “wife” as “relation” not “person”.
Your attestation of Il. 5.9 needs the two html links separated. Currently, they are uploaded as a single link.
Your attestation of Hom. Il. 1.590 is missing tags.
A number of your attestations are linked to multiple people (for example de Nat. deor. 3.22 is double linked to both Hera and Zeus); each should be made into separate annotations of each attestation.
Finally, you have not included any characterizations of Hephaestus in your annotations. Please include 5-6.
November 29, 2015 21:10
General Annotation Collection/20151017/7
(cite/perseus/pdlann.270.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Overall, excellent job! There are several small mistakes which can be attended to if you would like this to be published.
Remove the “person” annotation of Thymbris. He has no entry in the William Smith Dictionary, and therefore no stable id.
For you Dionysus “relation” annotation, change the spelling to “Companion”.
The 39th link in your annotation is unreadable. Please delete and recreate.
November 29, 2015 21:44
General Annotation Collection/20151124/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.300.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - So far this is good progress, please make the suggested changes below and you be all good for your official submission:
Add a stable id to your Proserpina person annotation.
For your Jason relation, “ally” is not an accepted relation. Please change.
Tag Euboea as “parent” not “parents”.
Tag Thetys with “relation” not “relationship”.
One of the annotations of Zeus is not tagged.
Another annotation of Zeus has a misspelled stable id.
You need a good deal of work on your attestations. Make sure that you include a link to the text of the attestation in each annotation. Make sure all your links are functional. Make sure you make separate annotations when linking multiple people to the same text attestation. Make sure to tag all your attestations.
As it stands now, you have not included any characterizations of Hera. Please include 5-6.
November 29, 2015 22:23
General Annotation Collection/2015127/2
(cite/perseus/pdlann.306.1) Vote
AcceptNoChanges - Excellent, well done.
December 09, 2015 02:49
General Annotation Collection/20151123/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.298.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - This is well done, the only technical error is that "characterizationOf" is misspelled in your tags.
The only other issue is that most of your annotations are in the William Smith Dictionary which was not linked in github:
http://www.perseus.tufts.edu/hopper/text?doc=Perseus:text:1999.04.0104:alphabetic letter=D:entry group=5:entry=demeter-bio-1
the rest of the annotations are in the correct link:
http://perseids.org/sites/smiths/D/demeter_1.html
While there are no problems with annotations themselves, if your annotations published then you need to put all your annotations in the same, correct, dictionary entry.
Otherwise, very well done.
December 09, 2015 14:40
General Annotation Collection/2015122/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.303.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Good work, the links on your attestations of (Hes. Th. 133), (337, &c., 349, &c), and (Il. 14.303, &c.) are not working properly. If you want your annotations published, try to recreate these annotations with functional links.
Otherwise, well done.
December 09, 2015 14:49
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