General Annotation Collection/20141015/11
(cite/perseus/pdlann.32.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - You did a great job with both the Bibliography and the Timeline. There are a few grammatical and spelling errors in the timeline, so look through and fix those - remember all quotation marks and periods. Also, try to find images for the artifacts if you can.
October 20, 2014 16:44
General Annotation Collection/20141015/28
(cite/perseus/pdlann.49.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Great job on the timeline!
Just a couple things to fix- I would change the abbreviated titles to the full name of the author and their work, and the line/chapter #s which you already included.
Also, I wouldn't quote the Louvre's description of the artifacts, rather, give a short description of what the object is and what it depicts in your own words.
October 21, 2014 14:27
General Annotation Collection/20141015/6
(cite/perseus/pdlann.27.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - You both did a good job on the timeline. Just one issue- your timeline stops in the 300sBC. This is very late. You should try to find some later sources, whether artifacts or literary sources, as the period we are studying goes up to 600 AD.
October 21, 2014 21:23
General Annotation Collection/20141015/8
(cite/perseus/pdlann.29.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - I made a couple notes on your grade sheet for changes-
-I would not quote the museum's description of your artifacts, but describe in your own words what the object is/depicts
-watch out for some grammatical errors, unfinished sentences and awkward phrasing
- great job! I enjoyed the variety of objects you included
October 22, 2014 00:26
General Annotation Collection/20141015/9
(cite/perseus/pdlann.30.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Just a couple notes:
- make sure to put excerpts in quotation marks, and watch out for errors, too
- you may want to find more later sources/artifacts, as your timeline jumps from 300 BC to only one source after, Seneca
October 22, 2014 00:55
General Annotation Collection/20141013/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.11.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Great job on both the Bibliography and the Timeline.
-Just one note on the Timeline- one spelling mistake on your Euripides entry
You have an array of primary and secondary sources to begin working with for your outline.
October 22, 2014 01:30
General Annotation Collection/20141015/2
(cite/perseus/pdlann.23.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Just a couple notes-
- remember to include lines #s in the titles
- watch out for typos in the quotes and some awkward wording
Great job! You have compiled a good number of sources and many artifacts to analyze the different aspects of your object!
October 22, 2014 01:54
General Annotation Collection/20141015/29
(cite/perseus/pdlann.50.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Great job looking into both stories depicted on your Calyx.
A couple notes-
- watch out for typos (see Quintus quote)
- include the painter's name on your MFA object - Tyszkiewicz Painter
October 22, 2014 02:12
General Annotation Collection/20141022/3
(cite/perseus/pdlann.70.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - ok
October 22, 2014 14:51
General Annotation Collection/20141016/3
(cite/perseus/pdlann.63.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - ok
October 22, 2014 14:52
General Annotation Collection/20141016/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.61.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - k
October 22, 2014 14:52
General Annotation Collection/20141015/35
(cite/perseus/pdlann.56.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - ok
October 22, 2014 14:52
General Annotation Collection/20141015/31
(cite/perseus/pdlann.52.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - k
October 22, 2014 14:52
General Annotation Collection/20141015/10
(cite/perseus/pdlann.31.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - k
October 22, 2014 14:53
General Annotation Collection/20141014/7
(cite/perseus/pdlann.18.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - k
October 22, 2014 14:53
General Annotation Collection/20141014/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.12.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - k
October 22, 2014 14:53
General Annotation Collection/20141029/12
(cite/perseus/pdlann.94.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Excellent job! I enjoyed the objects you found that contrast your MFA object. Your descriptions are on-point as well. Some typos - I noted them on the grading paper.
November 04, 2014 21:46
General Annotation Collection/20141029/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.84.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - The map is well done- but Prof. Beaulieu mentioned multiple times in class that interpretations were to be added to the descriptions.
November 05, 2014 11:43
General Annotation Collection/20141029/5
(cite/perseus/pdlann.87.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Great job with the map, but some of your entries are missing interpretations.
November 05, 2014 11:52
General Annotation Collection/20141029/8
(cite/perseus/pdlann.90.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Great job. The time map and added interpretations are well done.
November 05, 2014 12:43
General Annotation Collection/20141027/3
(cite/perseus/pdlann.80.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - I see you are focusing on the Roman aspect of the daimon/genius for your paper, however, for the timeline it would be important to include Greek sources as well, as the daimon/genius was imperative and linked both cultures, as you mention in your paper. See Plato's "Apology", Xenophon's "Apology", and Plutarch's "The Daimon of Socrates".
November 05, 2014 13:51
General Annotation Collection/20141029/4
(cite/perseus/pdlann.86.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Just a few minor issues- the notes are on your grading rubric.
November 05, 2014 14:06
General Annotation Collection/20141027/2
(cite/perseus/pdlann.79.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - The web-link seems to be corrupted - can you resend it for me, and as a time mapper link rather than a google doc. See the timeline directions - it tells you how to do this, and there's an explanatory clip on the time mapper website that also explains.
Don't worry; you won't have any credit taken off!
November 05, 2014 16:10
General Annotation Collection/2014116/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.117.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Great job on the map, and thank you for resending the links to me. I'm not sure what was going on the first time, maybe it was my computer acting up!
Just one comment- a couple of your slides are missing analysis or require deeper analysis. For example, in your first slide your only analysis is "only one version of his myth," but what is important in this version? what does it tell you?
Overall, it is very well done!
9/10
November 07, 2014 13:56
General Annotation Collection/2014126/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.127.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Hello - we would love to publish your timeline, but three coordinate points are missing from the map - (Figurine of Asclepius and Paus.2.10.3 and Terracotta figurine). If you add those and resubmit we will publish the time map!
December 25, 2014 18:15
General Annotation Collection/2014124/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.126.1) Vote
AcceptNoChanges - To be published
December 25, 2014 18:27
General Annotation Collection/2014128/10
(cite/perseus/pdlann.140.1) Vote
AcceptNoChanges - To be published
December 26, 2014 20:04
General Annotation Collection/2014128/20
(cite/perseus/pdlann.150.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Hello! I believe you began publishing your spreadsheet, but did not share it, so I am not able to view either link. To fully publish/share the spreadsheet - you publish to the web, then click share in the top right corner, click on advanced options in the box, you will then see a link that will allow anyone to view! If you resubmit that link, I can publish your time map on Perseids! It is well done, so please send the link!
December 26, 2014 20:26
General Annotation Collection/2014129/2
(cite/perseus/pdlann.157.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Hello! If you would like your time map to be published to Perseids, please add interpretation in addition to the quotes, and if you are able to find them, stable links to photos for your art objects.
December 26, 2014 20:34
General Annotation Collection/2014128/2
(cite/perseus/pdlann.132.1) Vote
AcceptNoChanges - To be published
December 26, 2014 20:39
General Annotation Collection/2014123/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.123.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - This is just an extra. The spreadsheet you sent in after this was published. You do not need to resubmit!
December 26, 2014 20:43
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