General Annotation Collection/20141028/2
(cite/perseus/pdlann.83.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - good work, comments are on the hardcopy of the sheet.
November 10, 2014 01:39
General Annotation Collection/20141029/33
(cite/perseus/pdlann.113.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - comments are on paper sheet
November 10, 2014 01:39
General Annotation Collection/20141029/19
(cite/perseus/pdlann.100.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - comments are on paper sheet
November 10, 2014 01:40
General Annotation Collection/20141029/3
(cite/perseus/pdlann.85.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - ok. see paper sheet for comments
November 10, 2014 02:08
General Annotation Collection/20141029/9
(cite/perseus/pdlann.91.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - ok. see paper sheet for comments
November 10, 2014 02:09
General Annotation Collection/2014127/2
(cite/perseus/pdlann.129.1) Vote
AcceptNoChanges - Your timeline will be published! Good work, all semester. -John
December 23, 2014 21:49
General Annotation Collection/2014127/3
(cite/perseus/pdlann.130.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - It's almost perfected! Please just use a different picture for "Frieze of the Siphnian Treasury" (It is online, but does not load), then resubmit it and I will publish it. -John
December 23, 2014 21:57
General Annotation Collection/2014128/25
(cite/perseus/pdlann.155.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - This has been vastly improved. If you would like to take your analysis for each object and say in one sentence what, related to the myth, each object represents (i.e. what you wrote about them in your final draft)and resubmit the map, I can publish it. Also, I added two points to each of your map grades since we talked about how some images were temporarily unavailable.
December 23, 2014 23:05
General Annotation Collection/2014128/15
(cite/perseus/pdlann.145.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Your timemap is rather good. Your final draft was excellent. With a few further edits, I can publish the timemap, if you want:
Add pictures (busts of the authors or some relevant picture) to your text sources.
I wouldn't say that the ram is "heroic" rather than Odysseus.
Please link to the image only page (rt click select 'view image only' link to THAT page) for the ones that are linked to the MFA site (images won't load).
Also add your comments that were in your final draft that analyzed the art- these were all very good. They are the specific things, like saying how Polyphemus is bent over, making him appear smaller and more human-like, etc.
Don't bother adding more info about Euripides' Cyclops on the map.
December 23, 2014 23:19
General Annotation Collection/2014129/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.156.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - Not a bad resubmission. But your final draft was excellent. If you would like to see this timemap published, add about a sentence of the relevant analysis which you had in your paper to each object, especially the ones described least. Also, add a picture to every text source (just a bust of the author is fine, or some relevant scene; even a picture of Odysseus from the movie The Odyssey would be OK). And definitely fix the link to the "intaglio with Diomedes holding the Palladium" which is currently broken.
December 23, 2014 23:29
General Annotation Collection/2014128/9
(cite/perseus/pdlann.139.1) Vote
AcceptNoChanges - going to publish
December 26, 2014 03:06
General Annotation Collection/2014128/8
(cite/perseus/pdlann.138.1) Vote
AcceptNoChanges - gonna publish it, good work! -John
December 26, 2014 03:17
General Annotation Collection/2014129/4
(cite/perseus/pdlann.159.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - I think you did this porject by yourself; I know it's a lot of work now, but if you would like to update all the descriptions and add all the pics, I can publish it. If not, no worries. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
December 26, 2014 03:26
General Annotation Collection/2014128/4
(cite/perseus/pdlann.134.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - If you would like to add pictures to the textual sources (and maybe a few short quotes too, but the art sources already look complete)I can publish this. Good work and Happy New years! -John
December 26, 2014 03:31
General Annotation Collection/2014128/24
(cite/perseus/pdlann.154.1) Vote
AcceptNoChanges - Awesome, ready for publishing, good work!
December 26, 2014 03:47
General Annotation Collection/2014127/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.128.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - This looks fantastic! Ready for publishing. Happy Holidays! -John
December 26, 2014 03:55
General Annotation Collection/20141029/12
(cite/perseus/pdlann.94.1) Vote
AcceptNoChanges - Looks good, going to publish. Happy holidays! -John
December 26, 2014 04:01
General Annotation Collection/2014128/7
(cite/perseus/pdlann.137.1) Vote
AcceptNoChanges - looking good, publishable, happy holidays!
December 26, 2014 04:13
General Annotation Collection/2014128/11
(cite/perseus/pdlann.141.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - THe descriptions are excellent. I can publish this if you just link to images not on mfa.org but right click, select view image, and then link to that page. (just remember to resubmit).
December 26, 2014 04:20
General Annotation Collection/20141226/1
(cite/perseus/pdlann.161.1) Vote
AcceptNoChanges - excellent, publishable
December 26, 2014 18:05
General Annotation Collection/2014123/2
(cite/perseus/pdlann.124.1) Vote
AcceptNoChanges - Looks good. Publishable. Happy holidays
December 26, 2014 18:10
General Annotation Collection/2014128/21
(cite/perseus/pdlann.151.1) Vote
ReturnToRevise - The descriptions here are accurate. If you would like to see it published, add another sentence or so (as appropriate) to each (e.g. maybe a relevant phrase or sentence from your final draft), and give pictures to every piece of evidence. For Livy, just a bust of Livy would be fine. Pictures of the scenes discussed also work. Happy new year, John
December 28, 2014 16:04
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